So, having reviewed AN ALARMING SHORT STORY, which
Was penned over three days time
I spied complex streams of consciousness, which
Really need simplifying; however ...
Ravi and I are soon to enjoy our play date, so
Common sense suggests delaying
Such a time consuming task until
My mind feels free to roam over
Complex trains of intuitive thought that
Chugged through subconscious tunnels, deep inside my mind until
The first draft of this story surfaced on Friday, while
I was flying in a jet plane to the Midwest, then
After diving more deeply into my subconscious while
Flying home on Sunday, the second draft emerged and
This morning, while reviewing this second, more detailed account of
A significant moment in time when self control
Empowered a small portion of my brain to initiate
A change for the better that served to
Halt a haunting episode of PTSD from
Hijacking 100% of my conscious awareness, I spied
Additional strings of insights, which had filtered through
My wall of denial into conscious awareness in such
A complex fashion as to be in need of simplification so as to
Ease my thought processor's next reading ...
I mean, my conscious decision to leave run on sentences
Stand on their own is one thing, but leaving
Hanging participles to fend for themselves is
Too much to expect from the teacher in me ...
And BTW, have I mentioned that ... Whoops!
Look at the time!
Unlike Alice's white rabbit, your friend Annie
Will not be late for a very important date with Ravi
Suggesting why today's post will be continued
When next we meet ...
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