Sunday, March 11, 2012

422 JUST AS EDITING CLARIFIES COMPLEXITY ....

Upon reviewing the last three posts
I spied complexity of thought
In need of clarifying
So that's what I did—

Again and again
Until
I got it
Right

While editing
In hopes of achieving
Simplicity
This thought popped out of my mind:

If it makes sense to simplify complex thoughts
Then it makes sense to clarify repressed emotion for this reason:
Repressed emotion, left in its raw, maze like state
Intensifies pain, which we're feeling—today ...

And when it comes to pain
I'd rather experience
Less than more ...
How'bout you?

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