Want to know why I've not posted for several days?
Trains of thought, comprising Post 1373 48H's, prove so complex
That I've felt compelled to work at simplying certain insights until
Every sentence is grammatically correct, and so far, upon
Awakening to reread that post, day after day, mistakes
Pop up that had been missed the day before, and here's why
That happens when trains of intuitive thought, laden with
contemplative complexity, continue to flow freely from
Deep within the storehouse of knowledge that I've chosen to
Absorb, over my lifetime: During each editing process
My think tank begins to multitask in this way ...
While working to simplify insights, already penned,
Additional insights ignite, suggesting why
The conscious portion of my mind, working toward simplicity
Clashes with intuitive thought, which complicates matters by
Adding insights that prove directly related to those that are
Already in need of simplification, and, therefore
It's not hard to imagine that, upon awakening the next dat
I spy compound sentences that are seriously
In need of being grammatically tidied up, and since
That's been true of Post 1473 48H's, which was originally
Written, over the weekend, while Will and I were visiting
His brother, Jeremy and Jeremy's wife, Marnie
My brain was so busy, absorbing depths of emotion (sadness) as
Well as logic, concerning Jeremy's recent diagnosis, that
Post 1473 48H's, which was originally written while
I was resting in Jeremy's guest room, reflects
The depth of complexity that has continued to run through
My think tank throughout this past week ...
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